You
You are the
whisper of angel wings
Kissing my
eyes awake
You are the
tornado that rushes
In between
my shadow and soul
You are the
peak of my Denali
A ripple
transformed to the Amazon
The fire of
Venus’s ruby
You are the
twelfth of never
in my
feather garden
Wow, this is fantastic. I love the imagery...so fresh and different from what most love poems are. The second verse is my favorite.
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DeleteSome wonderful phrases in this. Lovingly crafted.
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DeleteThis is gorgeous, Annis, and I agree with Jennie--such a different take on the love poem. I really like the 3rd verse, beautifully vivid.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Lena. Glad you like it.
DeleteAll of your poems are like gems, quietly lovely.
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Bless your heart, Shan. Thank you.
DeleteWow this poem is lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Annie. I'm glad you like it.
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