Thursday, October 4, 2012

October 4, 2012



You

You are the whisper of angel wings
Kissing my eyes awake

You are the tornado that rushes
In between my shadow and soul

You are the peak of my Denali
A ripple transformed to the Amazon
The fire of Venus’s ruby

You are the twelfth of never
in my feather garden



10 comments:

  1. Wow, this is fantastic. I love the imagery...so fresh and different from what most love poems are. The second verse is my favorite.

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    1. Thanks, Jennie. I appreciate your comments.

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  2. Some wonderful phrases in this. Lovingly crafted.

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  3. This is gorgeous, Annis, and I agree with Jennie--such a different take on the love poem. I really like the 3rd verse, beautifully vivid.

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  4. All of your poems are like gems, quietly lovely.

    Thank you for sharing them.

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    1. Thank you, Annie. I'm glad you like it.

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