Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Day 2 - OctPoWriMo 2013: Promenade




Is it the walk or the walk way
Who knows from reading
Just the word on the page
But let us make it what we think
It is
Unlike,
But similar
Souls march forward
Almost float
along a Path.
So promenade?
Or promenade?


     
        
















 ~ Man Ray  1890-1976
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4 comments:

  1. ChristineOctober 2, 2013 at 10:00 PM

    I really like this! Uncluttered yet very evocative.

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    1. Annis CassellsOctober 3, 2013 at 8:14 AM

      Thank you, Christine. I appreciate your encouragement. xoA

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  2. SunitaOctober 9, 2013 at 9:46 PM

    Souls march forward
    Almost float
    along a Path.

    Lovely lines there :)

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  3. Annis CassellsOctober 9, 2013 at 10:34 PM

    Thanks, Sunita. xoA

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