Tuesday, October 17, 2017

Day 17 - OctPoWriMo 2017: Knowing You


For today’s challenge: Choose 50 words. Write a poem using only those words, repeating and rhyming as you see fit. You can use the words as many times as you like, but limit yourself to just the 50 words.The prompt also mentioned a dragon. But they are not really my thing.




Knowing You

No one knows who you really are
Unless you show them true
The folks who love you, love you
The rest will watch and decide

Their views and yours may well collide
And when you show them true
Some still won’t know who you really are
But the folks who love you, love you

Don’t worry about the rest


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12 comments:

  1. I love the repetition, especially this line: "show them true". Thank you <3

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  2. I tried n tried but could not write in this form... Cheers to you.

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    1. I understand, Deepti. Some days, some stuff just won't come. But maybe another day! Thanks for commenting. xoA

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  3. Truth Could Never Ring Any Louder!!!
    An Angel of the Lord has Spoken : )
    LOVE IT!!

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  4. Yes. Worth repeating, in many different forms, so that we can be reminded.
    Thank you for making it short and to the point, expressing it clearly.
    I love the flow of your poem, the words used.
    Thank you
    XO

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    1. Thank you, Dawn. We all need these reminders every now and then. Thanks for your comments. xoA

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