Monday, October 21, 2013

Day 21 - OctPoWriMo 2013: Precious Boy




Today, our challenge was to write a micropoem.
Very short.Very sweet. Very simple. Seventeen syllables or less.


Precious Boy

His lifetime passed before our eyes, from slumber, he awoke, snatched it back.

12 comments:

  1. Sounds like things turned out all right then. That's a relief!

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  2. They did; and we are so grateful. Thank you. xoA

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  3. A lot of story in that poem, very nice. :-)

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  4. Oh this great. You captured a world in just a few words.

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  5. A tiny tale with a big backstory, I imagine. :) Fab as always Annis. X

    shahscribbles.wordpress.com

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    1. Thanks, Shah. Yes, you're right; a big backstory.

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  6. Ooh, I love the sense of mystery!

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