Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Day 22 - OctPoWriMo 2013: Mr. Right

Today's prompt was titled “A Picture Paints a Thousand Poems.”  We were to choose a photo and use it as inspiration for poetry.

Photo by Stephen Hernandez

Mr. Right

Looking for Mr. Right
The one to teach me
How to be a man

To walk tall and proud
Beside me
In this life

Looking for Mr. Right
To step up
To be the Dad I need


  1. Nice! Clean clear lines. I especially like the middle stanza. I also appreciated that you twisted the usual connotation of Mr. Right from the romantic to the familial.

    1. Thank you, Anna. The right person in our lives makes a huge difference. xoA