Trying out the Joseph's Star form today. This one's a double. Each stanza has seven lines with a prescribed number of syllables per line: 1-3-5-7-5-3-1
Blueprint
Live
Dance in wind
Uninhibited
Be like tumbleweed chasing
Ghostly sky riders
Across fields
Search
Seize
Each moment
Capture life. Each
day
Dole out words of
love and peace
Fetch smiles,
radiance
And respect
Live
Annis, I love this so much - the idea of dancing freely like tumbleweed, chasing sky riders. Beautifully presented in Joseph's Star as well! <3
ReplyDeleteThanks, Annie, for taking the time to read, and for your kind words. xoA
DeleteI love it, particularly the second stanza.
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